The night of last day of 2010 was great.

2013-11-18 · 첨삭 강사 Juliet

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Q1 - It's ____ than mine. smaller Q2 - Yours is ____ than mine. bigger Q3 - It's ____ than you think. more common Q4 - It cost ____ than I thought. less Q5 - He's ____ than he looks. Either could be used here. Q6 - The road is ____ than the motorway. narrower Q7 - She talks ____ than I do. Either could be used here. Q8 - It's ____ than it looks. worse Q9 - It's ____ than it was. better Q10 - It was ____ than I thought it would be. Either could be used here. We went to the house to eat dinner. House host gave some advises. It will be dangerous to go Eifel tower in the midnight, because of bullies. We accepted the advise and dicided to go another place. The night of last day of 2010 went was great. Almost of people in the street were excited. the light bulbs were shining and lighting all the streets. The most important thing was we meet several women in the place I think lt was some kind of Night club or something. (because they dressed up with very short skirt.)

강사 첨삭

Hi there once again!

So, this is the last part of your story. This part of your trip is the most interesting one, I guess. This trip of yours to Paris is nothing but a great one!^^ If given the chance, would you go there again?^^

~T. Nina^^

 Q1 - It\'s ____ than mine.
smaller

>>Correct
Q2 - Yours is ____ than mine.
bigger

>>Correct
Q3 - It\'s ____ than you think.
more common

>>Correct
Q4 - It cost ____ than I thought.
less

>>Correct
Q5 - He\'s ____ than he looks.

Either could be used here.

>>Correct
Q6 - The road is ____ than the motorway.
narrower

>>Either could be used here.
Q7 - She talks ____ than I do.
Either could be used here.

>>Correct
Q8 - It\'s ____ than it looks.
worse

>>Correct
Q9 - It\'s ____ than it was.
better

>>Correct
Q10 - It was ____ than I thought it would be.
Either could be used here.
>>quicker
We went to the house to eat dinner.
>>Correct
House host gave some advises.
>>The host gave some pieces of advice.
It will be dangerous to go Eifel tower in the midnight, because of bullies.
>>It will be dangerous to go to the Eiffel Tower at midnight because of bullies.
We accepted the advise and dicided to go another place.
>>We took their advice and decided to go to another place instead.
The night of last day of 2010 went was great.
>>The last night of 2010 went great.
Almost of people in the street were excited.
>>Almost all people in the street were excited.
the light bulbs were shining and lighting all the streets.
>>Correct (observe capitalization, though)
The most important thing was we meet several women in the place
>>The most important thing was we met several women in this place. ^^
I think lt was some kind of Night club or something.
>>I think it was some kind of a night club or something.^^
(because they dressed up with very short skirt.)

>>Correct^^

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