The number of people interested in cosmetic surgery is increasing in order to improve their physical
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The standard of beauty varies from country to country because of culture and preferences. I don\'t think all people around world would like to get plastic surgery but many want to changes with various ways such as weight control, applying cosmetics and so on. I agree that cosmetic surgery sometimes can help people get self-confidence. It mentally helps someone who have psychological problem because of their physical appearance. However, there are a lot of patients who have been suffering from the side effect followed the surgery. In serious case, patient is not able to tell their original appearance because their skin melted and it is not possible to be recovered with recent medical technology. So, I think people have to think again when they make a decision and try to do another method like exercise. In addition, government have to make proper law about the candidates of plastic surgery so, we can make a difficult approach getting plastic surgery and can keep people healthy.
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The standard of beauty varies from country to country because of culture and preferences.
>>> The standard of beauty varies from one country to another because of culture and preferences.
I don\'t think all people around world would like to get plastic surgery but many want to changes with various ways such as weight control, applying cosmetics and so on.
>>> I don\'t think all people around the world would like to get plastic surgery but many want changes with various ways such as weight control, applying cosmetics and so on.
I agree that cosmetic surgery sometimes can help people get self-confidence.
>>> CORRECT
It mentally helps someone who have psychological problems because of their physical appearance.
>>> CORRECT
However, there are a lot of patients who have been suffering from the side effects followed the surgery.
>>> However, there are a lot of patients who have been suffering from the side effects caused by the surgery.
In serious cases, patient is not able to tell their original appearance because their skin melted and it is not possible to be recovered with recent medical technology.
>>> In serious cases, the patient is not able to tell their original appearance because their skin melted and it is not possible to be recovered with recent medical technology.
So, I think people have to think again when they make a decision and try to do another method like exercising.
>>> CORRECT
In addition, the government has to make proper laws about the candidates of plastic surgery so, we can make a difficult approach getting plastic surgery and can keep the people healthy.
>>> CORRECT
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