The number of people who keep pets is increasing.(1)
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I don\'t... But, I spotted that lots of places where pets could use, and play are increasing.
>>I don\'t but I spotted lots of places where pets could use and play are increasing.
Also,\"hen I type\" pet clothes, food, or furniture\".
>>Also, I can see pet clothes, food, or furniture\".
I see a lot of things.
>>CORRECT!
when I see a magazine, I see a lot of thing about pets too!
>>When I see a magazine, I see a lot of things about pets, too!
for example, places you can go with your pet and things about pet DNAs.
>>For example, places you can go with your pet and things about pet\'s DNAs.
But... why are all these things happening?
>>But why are all these things happening?
That\'s because\" the number of people who keep pets is increasing\".
>>That\'s because the number of people who keep pets is increasing.
Then ... you will have another question.
>>Then, you will have another question.
why is the number of people who keep pets is increasing?
>>Why is the number of people who keep pets is increasing?
First, many families has 3 n5 family members.
>>First, many families have 3 to 5 family members.
That means, many families are nuclear families.
>>CORRECT!
So, it could be more lonely than having many family members.
>>CORRECT!
so, they get a pet.
>>CORRECT!
The pet will be like a family member.
>>CORRECT!
It will be less lonely.
>>CORRECT!
They can have fun with it.
>>CORRECT!
play with it.
>> Play with it.
feed it
>> Feed it.
... It will be so fun!
>>CORRECT!
Second, many people have brothers or sisters.
>>CORRECT!
Or, maybe both!
>>CORRECT!
Mmm ... Many of my friends fight with their brothers or sisters.
>>CORRECT!
It natural to fight.
>>CORRECT!
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