The number of people who keep pets is increasing (2)
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But, I found out that some of my friends have a pet to prevent fighting.
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The theory is\" if you have a pet, they can get closer while taking care of the put\".
>>The theory is\" if you have a pet, they can get closer while taking care of the pet\".
I think it\'s quite theory.
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Third, many studies say\" if you have a pet, the pet can give a positive effect to you\".
>> Third, many studies say\" if you have a pet, the pet can give a positive effect on you\".
It can make people feel better.
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And ... pets are cute.
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So. maybe the pet can brighten out minds!
>>So, maybe the pet can brighten our minds!
I guess many people adopt pets to \" brighten their minds\".
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I suppose sometimes, pets are more po.sitive than us.
>>I suppose sometimes pets are more positive than us.
Now, do you understand why the number of people who keep pets are increasing?
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Personally, I want to have a cat.
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But, my mom and dad says\" No!\"
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Well ... They say the house gets messy ...
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I have to cross my fingers that someday, I can persuade them.
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But, in the meanwhile, I can write another essay someday.
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