The number of people who keep pets is increasing (2)

2020-01-20 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

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But, I found out that some of my friends have a pet to prevent fighting. How does this work? The theory i s\" if you have a pet, they can get closer while taking care of the put\". I think it\'s quite theory. Third, many studies say\" if you have a pet, the pet can give a positive effect to you\". Wow! It can make people feel better. And ... pets are cute. So. maybe the pet can brighten out minds! I guess many people adopt pets to \" brighten their minds\". I suppose sometimes, pets are more po.sitive than us. Now, do you understand why the number of people who keep pets are increasing? Personally, I want to have a cat. But, my mom and dad says\" No!\" Well ... They say the house gets messy ... I have to cross my fingers that someday, I can persuade them. But, in the meanwhile, I can write another essay someday. Thank-you.

강사 첨삭

Thank you Rose!

~Teacher Lucy


But, I found out that some of my friends have a pet to prevent fighting.

>>CORRECT!

The theory is\" if you have a pet, they can get closer while taking care of the put\".

>>The theory is\" if you have a pet, they can get closer while taking care of the pet\".

I think it\'s quite theory.

>>CORRECT!
 Third, many studies say\" if you have a pet, the pet can give a positive effect to you\".

>> Third, many studies say\" if you have a pet, the pet can give a positive effect on you\".

It can make people feel better.

>>CORRECT!

And ... pets are cute.

>>CORRECT!

So. maybe the pet can brighten out minds!

>>So, maybe the pet can brighten our minds!

 I guess many people adopt pets to \" brighten their minds\".

>>CORRECT!

I suppose sometimes, pets are more po.sitive than us.

>>I suppose sometimes pets are more positive than us.
 Now, do you understand why the number of people who keep pets are increasing?

>>CORRECT!

Personally, I want to have a cat.

>>CORRECT!

But, my mom and dad says\" No!\"

>>CORRECT!

Well ... They say the house gets messy ...

>>CORRECT!

 I have to cross my fingers that someday, I can persuade them.

>>CORRECT!

 But, in the meanwhile, I can write another essay someday.

>>CORRECT!

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