The Old man and the Sea

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My favorite novel is The Old man and the Sea that was written by Ernest Hemingway. 

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This is the story about old man who is fisherman.

>> This is the story about an old fisherman.
One day one day a big fish bite a bait and he tried to catch the fish.

>> One day, a big fish bit the bait and the fisherman tried to catch the fish.
It was hard for him to catch the big fish because he is too old. 

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But finally he caught the fish and he hung it by his boat. 

>> But finally he caught the fish and hung it on his boat. 

And then he started to come back to the land.

>> And then he started to go back to the land.

While he came back many sharks tried to eat fish so the old man fought with them to keep the fish.

>> While he is sailing back many sharks tried to eat the fish so the old man fought with them to keep the fish.

When he came back to the harbor the fish\'s bone was left only.

>> When he came back to the harbor the only thing left was the fish bone.

I like this book because it\'s story was so exciting to me.

>> I like this book because the story is so exciting for me.

And I want to recommend this book to friends who is tired at studying.th

>> I want to recommend this book to my friends who are tired of studying.