The Old man and the Sea

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My favorite novel is The Old man and the Sea that was written by Ernest Hemingway. 

>> My favorite novel is Ernest Hemingway\'s \"The Old Man and the Sea\".
 The main character of this story is an old fisherman.

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 One day he caught a big fish and brought it to the land.

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 And people were surprised because the fish was large.

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 However the only thing left was the fish bone

>> However, the only thing left was the fish\'s bone.
 It was hard for him to catch the big fish because shark tried to eat the fish.

>> It was hard for him to catch the big fish because a shark tried to eat it.
 But he never gave up and finally he did it. 

>> But he never gave up and he finally caught it.
 I feel the old man is a great person.

>> I feel like the old man is a great person.
 And I learned if I don\'t give up I can do anything

>> Moreover, I learned that if I don\'t give up, then I can do anything.
 So I want to recommend this book to friends who want to give up something.

>> So I want to recommend this book to my friends who are thinking about giving up.