The older leader?
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Hello sir,
Well said sir. I think leaders shouldn\'t be too old nor too young. I agree that older people tend to be authoritarian and sometimes they close their ears to the opinion of other people. See you later sir!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
Everyone has a stubborn as you get older.
>>Everyone gets stubborn as they get older.
Maybe this indicated the evidence that the older has a various experience of the world.
>>Maybe this is an indication or the evidence that the older people has various experience of the world.
Whereas they are prone to authoritarian. And also demand to obedience.
>>Whereas they are prone to being authoritarian. And also they demand obedience.
Because of this, the older leader is very big to fail.
>>Because of this, the older leader has a big chance to fail.
The leader in 50s is the most in the world.
>>Most leaders of the world are in their 50s.
U.S. President Obama was elected in his late 40s.
>>correct!
People acquire skills and knowledge in their 30s. 40s have to organize in their everything.
>>correct!
50s display his ability and 60s have to left.
>>correct!
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