The on I\'m most afraid of.

Hi, [이름]!
Thank you very much for writing this beautiful essay.
I could say that it was full of honesty and it came from  your heart.
I loved reading about it.

I think most people are scared of death.
But it is inevitable and all people would get there eventually.
I hope you stay healthy and happy so you would live a longer life. ^^
See you again on Thursday. :)
~Teacher Charry

What I afraid most is death.

>> What I am afraid of most is death.
I never experienced death, and I don\'t want to experience death.

>> I have never experienced death and I don\'t want to experience death.

If I die, I think most people will forget me.

>> CORRECT!
This is my greed, but I don\'t want to die early.

>> I am probably greedy, but I don\'t want to die early.
So I want to be famous, so people won\'t forget me even if I die.

>> CORRECT!
And I don\'t know the afterlife because I\'ve never been dead.

>> In addition, I don\'t know about the afterlife because I\'ve never been dead.
So I sometimes think about the afterlife.

>> So, I sometimes think about the afterlife.