The one on the weekend
학생이 쓴 원문
I was cleaning at home every weekend. ㅠㅠ
I have a appointment with my friends.
I usually meet my friends after cleaning my home.
I wash my dog. and wiping the floor, wash dishes.
Also, i am taking the time to be at home painting pictures.
Usually painted a picture of a tree.
Thank you! teacher Becca !
강사 첨삭
Hello Ashley!
Thank you for sending in this one :)
Painting is a good way to kill some time.
Hope I can see your paintings soon. kkkk
See you in class!
~Teacher Becca~
Here are some corrections:
I was cleaning at home every weekend. ㅠㅠ
>> I am cleaning the house every weekend.
>> OR: I am cleaning at hoem every weekend. I have a appointment with my friends.
>> I have an appointment with my friends.
>> OR: I set an appointment with my friends.I usually meet my friends after cleaning my home.
>> I usually meet my friends after claening the house. I wash my dog. and wiping the floor, wash dishes.
>> I bathe my dog, wipe the floor, and wash the dishes.Also, i am taking the time to be at home painting pictures.
>> I also spend my time to paint pictures at home. Usually painted a picture of a tree.>> I usually paint pictures of trees.Thank you! teacher Becca !
>> Thank you, Teacher Becca!
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