The one on the weekend

2014-05-26 · 첨삭 강사 Becca

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I was cleaning at home every weekend. ㅠㅠ I have a appointment with my friends. I usually meet my friends after cleaning my home. I wash my dog. and wiping the floor, wash dishes. Also, i am taking the time to be at home painting pictures. Usually painted a picture of a tree. Thank you! teacher Becca !

강사 첨삭

Hello Ashley!   Thank you for sending in this one :) Painting is a good way to kill some time. Hope I can see your paintings soon. kkkk See you in class! ~Teacher Becca~ Here are some corrections:   I was cleaning at home every weekend. ㅠㅠ >> I am cleaning the house every weekend. >> OR: I am cleaning at hoem every weekend. I have a appointment with my friends. >> I have an appointment with my friends. >> OR: I set an appointment with my friends.I usually meet my friends after cleaning my home. >> I usually meet my friends after claening the house. I wash my dog. and wiping the floor, wash dishes. >> I bathe my dog, wipe the floor, and wash the dishes.Also, i am taking the time to be at home painting pictures. >> I also spend my time to paint pictures at home. Usually painted a picture of a tree.>> I usually paint pictures of trees.Thank you! teacher Becca ! >> Thank you, Teacher Becca!

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