The only thing constant is change
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes. I disagree with this idea that the only thing constant is change. Despite this, It\'s one of important fact for our life. Everthing is changing all the time include my life. Although the time is changing world, Making decision for how to live is on my choice. Sometimes, I can recognise to this when I don\'t do anything. If I don\'t do anything on my time, I just getting old and be more lazy. For overcome this, I should make decision for my future and everyday I have go make plan for my valuable day. As I said first, If I want and try to change my life, I can change continuously until when I alive.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jay! Thank you for your thoughts on this one! I appreciate it a lot! ^ ^
I have to agree with you. When it comes to changes in our lives, I guess we have the sole decision whether to do something about it. Change is constant I guess when it comes to physical and earthbound things! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
Yes. I disagree with this idea that the only thing constant is change.
>>I disagree with the idea that the only thing constant is change.
Despite this, It\'s one of important fact for our life.
>>Despite this, I can say that it\'s one of the most important fact in our lives.
Everthing is changing all the time include my life.
>>Everything changes all the time including my life.
Although the time is changing world, Making decision for how to live is on my choice.
>>Although the time is changing the world, making decisions on how to live my life is my choice.
Sometimes, I can recognise to this when I don\'t do anything.
>>Sometimes, I can relate to this when I don\'t do anything.
If I don\'t do anything on my time, I just getting old and be more lazy.
>>If I don\'t make use of my time well, I\'m just getting old and be more lazy.
For overcome this, I should make decision for my future and everyday I have go make plan for my valuable day.
>>To overcome this, I should decide for my future and have to make plans to make my day meaningful and valuable.
As I said first, If I want and try to change my life, I can change continuously until when I alive.
>>As I have mentioned earlier, if I want to try and change my life, I can change continuously until I die.
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