The opposite side of the Earth.

2014-08-11 · 첨삭 강사 Debby

학생이 쓴 원문

Chile is the opposite side of the Earth of Korea. I have wanted to go to Chile because there are a lot of beautiful sites like Atacama Desert. Also, I want to feel and learn the passion of South American. In South America, I think that I can experience exotic event. This is why I want to go to the Chile and I will go in the future!

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]! How are you? Passion is not something that you\'ll see but rather it\'s something that you can feel. South America can be a total opposit of your country but it\'s nice to know that you appreciate it. I also wish that you acheive that wish and find the passion in you too! Take care! T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you: Chile is the opposite side of the Earth of Korea. >> CORRECT Or> Chile is the opposite of Korea when in comes to location. I have wanted to go to Chile because there are a lot of beautiful sites like Atacama Desert. >> CORRECT OR> I wish to go there because of the beautiful sites like Atacama Desert. Also, I want to feel and learn the passion of South Americans. >>  CORRECT OR> I would also like to experience the passion of South Americans.  In South America, I think that I can experience exotic event. >> In South America, I think that I can experience an exotic event.  This is why I want to go to the Chile and I will go in the future! >> CORRECT OR> That\'s the reason that I want to go there and I will in the near future!^^

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