The origine of the circus
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History of the circus.
>> History of circus.
The circus is one of the oldest forms of entertainment in history.
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So, Today I would like to talk about the origine of the circus.
>> So today, I would like to talk about the origin of circus.
The ancient Romans were the first to enjoy the circus.
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Around the sixth century the circus was founded in Rome as a venue for public entertainmnet mostly chariot races which were a popular spectator sport.
>> Around the sixth century, the circus was founded in Rome as a venue for public entertainment mostly chariot races which was a popular spectator sport.
England was one of the first nations to embarce the modern circus.
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During the late 1700s an Englshman named Philip Astley founded the first modern circus.
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>> or: During the late 1700s an English named Philip Astley founded the first modern circus.
He was a skilled rier who invented stunt riding on horseback.
>> He was a skilled rider who invented the stunt riding on horseback.
He performed his stunts in a circus ring.
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After his act became popular in London, He was asked to perform in Frace.
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He later expanded his act to include clowns, acrobats and parades of trained animals.
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The last addition to his act was slaptick humor.
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During the early 1800s the United Stated took to the circus quickly after learning of its popularity in Europe.
>> During the early 1800s the United Stated took the circus quickly after learning of its popularity in Europe.
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