The part of my childhood that I remember the most
학생이 쓴 원문
I remember the time that I stayed at the Philippines the most. I was 11years old and I had a lot of experience and I really like the memories I masde. I became independent person after I came back to Korea. Until now, I really miss those days.
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Hi [이름]! Awww, that sounds nice. Not everyone is given the chance to study abroad. You really should cherish those moments. ^^ Anyways, thank you for sharing your experience.
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I remember the time that I stayed at the Philippines the most.
>> I will remember the time that I stayed in the Philippines the most.
I was 11years old and I had a lot of experience and I really like the memories I masde.
>> I was 11 years old. I had a lot of experiences and I really like the memories I made there.
I became independent person after I came back to Korea.
>> I became an independent person after I came back to Korea.
Until now, I really miss those days
>> CORRECT
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