The perfect neighbor.
학생이 쓴 원문
First, non-noisy person would be the perfect neighbor. Loudness only builds up stress. Second, peson who is a good greeter. Good greetings will make a good impression and make each other feel better. Third, person who can forgives others mistakes. Everyone makes mistakes. A person who is not angry and forgives small m mistakes will be a perfect neighbor. Lastly, person who is a good helper. Neighbors who can move heavy objects, babysit, or share a chore would be perfect.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
First, non-noisy person would be the perfect neighbor.
>>> First, a non-noisy person would be the perfect neighbor.
Loudness only builds up stress.
>>> CORRECT!
Second, peson who is a good greeter.
>>> Second, a person who is a good greeter.
Good greetings will make a good impression and make each other feel better.
>>> CORRECT!
Third, person who can forgives others mistakes.
>>> Third, a person who can forgive others\' mistakes.
Everyone makes mistakes.
>>> CORRECT!
A person who is not angry and forgives small m mistakes will be a perfect neighbor.
>>> CORRECT!
Lastly, person who is a good helper.
>>> Lastly, a person who is a good helper.
Neighbors who can move heavy objects, babysit, or share a chore would be perfect.
>>> CORRECT!
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