The place for first date
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I suggest that restaurant is best place for first date.
>> I think that a restaurant is the best place for first date.
Generally, people do not want to talk to each other in first date.
>> Generally, people do not want to talk to each other during the first date.
Not knowing other, they couldn\'t continue their conversation.
>> Not fully knowing each other, they couldn\'t continue their conversation.
However in the restaurant, they do not need to make conversation continuously.
>> However in the restaurant, they do not need to make the conversation continuously.
They could have delicious dinner with happiness.
>> CORRECT!
If they want to avoid awkward situation due to lack of conversation subject, just have to eat their food.
>> If they want to avoid awkward situations due to lack of conversational subjects, the could just eat their food.
Without conversation, they can share good mood as well.
>> CORRECT!
Because of this reason, restaurant is better selection for fist date.
>> Because of this reason, a restaurant is a better selection for fist date.
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