The place for first date

2019-02-20 · 첨삭 강사 Tricia

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I suggest that restaurant is best place for first date. Generally, people do not want to talk to each other in first date. Not knowing other, they couldn\'t continue their conversation. However in the restaurant, they do not need to make conversation continuously. They could have delicious dinner with happiness. If they want to avoid awkward situation due to lack of conversation subject, just have to eat their food. Without conversation, they can share good mood as well. Because of this reason, restaurant is better selection for fist date.

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I suggest that restaurant is best place for first date.

>> I think that a restaurant is the best place for first date.


Generally, people do not want to talk to each other in first date.

>> Generally, people do not want to talk to each other during the first date.


Not knowing other, they couldn\'t continue their conversation.

>> Not fully knowing  each other, they couldn\'t continue their conversation.


However in the restaurant, they do not need to make conversation continuously.

>> However in the restaurant, they do not need to make the conversation continuously.


They could have delicious dinner with happiness.

>> CORRECT!


If they want to avoid awkward situation due to lack of conversation subject, just have to eat their food.

>> If they want to avoid awkward situations due to lack of conversational subjects, the could just eat their food.


Without conversation, they can share good mood as well.

>> CORRECT!


Because of this reason, restaurant is better selection for fist date.

>> Because of this reason, a restaurant is a better selection for fist date.

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