The place I live

I lives in dormitory in my company with 2 room mates. It is located in Suwon, Kyunggi Province. I like the area where I live. Because my company is within walking distance, so I don't have to worry about the traffic jam when I commute. My room is very small, and I have to share it with 2 room mates. Therefore I have only what I absolutely need. When I open the door, First thing I see is three closets for each members. and 3 blankets next to the closets. which means there are no beds. My room is located on the 5th floor of the dormitory. and no elevator. But I like my dormitory. because I am supposed to work out everytime I walking up the steps and the rent is very reasonable.

Hello [이름]!!   I am so happy that you re-enrolled in my class . ^^ Anyway, your dormitory sounds like a convenient place to be especially because it is near your workplace. But you mentioned that there are no beds so I뭢 curious, do you feel comfortable sleeping without a bed? I live in an apartment with two bedrooms and I share it with one room mate. She was my college friend and my co-worker as well.. It뭩 quite far from my workplace but the rent is also reasonable enough.. On your composition here, there뭩 not much error on your grammar structure, just be careful with the punctuation marks. See you in class!!   T. Shy   I lives in dormitory in my company with 2 room mates. It is located in Suwon, Kyunggi Province.>> I live in a dormitory in my company with 2 room mates. It is located in Suwon, Kyunggi Province. When I open the door, First thing I see is three closets for each members. and 3 blankets next to the closets. which means there are no beds. >> When I open the door, first thing I see are three closets for each member, and 3 blankets next to the closets which means there are no beds. My room is located on the 5th floor of the dormitory. and no elevator.>> My room is located on the 5th floor of the dormitory and no elevator.But I like my dormitory. because I am supposed to work out everytime I walking up the steps and the rent is very reasonable. >> But I like my dormitory because I am supposed to work out everytime I walk up the steps and the rent is very reasonable.