The place I spend my retirement
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If I retire, I would like to travel foreign countries. And I want to live for one month at the cities or countries I like. Actually l had the chance before the Corona happened. I have been in New Zealand for a month. It was a very impressive experience. I became healthier and more refreshed. My husband also wants to live for a few months in other cities or countries.
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Hello, Gi [이름]!
Thank you for completing your homework.
That was a nice experience! ^^
Anyway, see you tomorrow!
-T.Jhozel
If I retire, I would like to travel foreign countries.
>> If I retire, I want to travel to different countries.
And I want to live for one month at the cities or countries I like.
>> And I want to spend a month in cities or countries that I like.
Actually l had the chance before the Corona happened.
>> Actually, I had the opportunity to travel before the pandemic.
I have been in New Zealand for a month. It was a very impressive experience.
>> Correct!
OR: I\'ve spent a month in New Zealand. It was an unforgettable experience.
OR: I\'ve spent a month in New Zealand. It was an unforgettable experience.
I became healthier and more refreshed.
>> I felt healthier and more energized.
My husband also wants to live for a few months in other cities or countries.
>> Correct!
OR: My husband would also like to spend a few months living in other cities or countries.
OR: My husband would also like to spend a few months living in other cities or countries.
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