The place I want to go
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Jay,
Traveling is always fun and exciting! Go anywhere and everywhere you like while you are still young.(\",)
Lynn
There are many countries that I want to go before die such as Australia, America, and Czech Republic.
>> There are many countries that I want to visit before I die such as Australia, America, and Czech Republic.
The most place I want to go is Plague, Czech Republic.
>> The place I want to visit the most is Prague, Czech Republic.
Actually, I don\'t know much about this country and city but I have heard my father went to this place and was expressed by beautiful scene at night.
>> Actually, I don\'t know much about this country and city but I have heard from my father that he went to that place and he said the night scene was very beautiful.
There is a liver in front of the Plauge Castle and my father said it was spectacular view.
>> There is a river in front of the Prague Castle and my father said it has an spectacular view.
I have a plan to go there after I finish my Working&Holiday to Australia.
>> correct!
I have never travel the other countries before, so my heart is already fluttering for the thinking of going there.
>> I have never traveled to other countries before, so my heart is already fluttering just thinking of going there.
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