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Let me introduce several famous buildings in Seoul. First, there is namsan tower. In the tower, you can see the entire Seoul. Second, you can visit Changduk-gung which is one of the World Cultural Heritages. It had participated in the history of Joseon Dynasty for about 500 years. You can enjoy the beauty of Korean palace atChangduk-gung.

Hi [이름](^^<) It was nice reading your composition for today. It was very informative, thank you for sharing interesting places in Korea. It is very helpful to always practice your English skills each time you get the chance to. Kindly check on some of the corrections listed below. Thank you! Have a great day! - T. Dominic -   Let me introduce several famous buildings in Seoul. >>CorrectFirst, there is namsan tower. >>First, we have Namsan Tower. >>First, there is the Namsan Tower.In the tower, you can see the entire Seoul. >>Correct >>In the tower you can see the whole of Seoul.Second, you can visit Changduk-gung which is one of the World Cultural Heritages. >> Second, you can visit Changduk-gung which is one of the World's Cultural Heritages. [Hmm, do you mean World's Cultural Heritage Places?] It had participated in the history of Joseon Dynasty for about 500 years. >>Correct You can enjoy the beauty of Korean palace atChangduk-gung.     >> You can enjoy the beauty of the Korean Palace at Changduk-gung.