The place which I want to live in.
학생이 쓴 원문
I'm looking for a new house.
I'd like to live a house made of brown brick and have a small lawn.
I also want Subways and parks to be near from the house.
The house should have two bedroom, large living room and kitchen.
In the living room, there are large windows that are seen the lawn.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Yeah! I think your idea of a house is wonderful! I hope in time you would be able to achieve that kind of house. Good choice of location since it would be accessible to a lot of places .Hope you will work hard to achieve it. Laters!
-T.Dominic-
I'm looking for a new house.
>>I'm looking for a new house.
I'd like to live a house made of brown brick and have a small lawn.
>>I'd like to live in a house made of brown bricks with a small lawn.
I also want Subways and parks to be near from the house.
>>I also want the subways and parks to be near my house.
The house should have two bedroom, large living room and kitchen.
>>The house should have two bedrooms, a large living room and a kitchen.
In the living room, there are large windows that are seen the lawn.
>> In the living room, there are large windows overlooking the lawn.
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