the place which I will never forget.
학생이 쓴 원문
The place which I will never forget is my home.
My home is sweet place that I come to relax in a tough life.
I love my house.
And if there are another place which I will never forget is zoo.
I love animal. they are so cute. And mystery of life things is marvelous
and interesting. Thanks for reading.
강사 첨삭
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~~ Teacher Kathy
The place which I will never forget is my home.
>> Correct!
OR:
>> Home is one of the place that I will never forget.
My home is sweet place that I come to relax in a tough life.
My home is sweet place that I come to relax in a tough life.
>> My home is like a sweet place where I can relax especially during tough times.
I love my house.
I love my house.
>> Correct!
OR:
>> I love my home.
And if there are another place which I will never forget is zoo.
And if there are another place which I will never forget is zoo.
>> Another place I will never forget is the zoo.
I love animal. they are so cute. And mystery of life things is marvelous and interesting.
I love animal. they are so cute. And mystery of life things is marvelous and interesting.
>> I love animals because they look cute. I also find mysteries of life and things marvelous and interesting.
Thanks for reading.
>> Correct!
OR:
>> Thank you for reading.
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