The plan to not waste my time.
학생이 쓴 원문
I have a lot of things I want to do.
I mean that I want to study about my job and play golf, paint the painting, learn something.
But I have time only after work and weekend. I know what I don’t have time is an excuse.
So I’m trying to use my time efficiently. To do that, I decided to set a priority for what I want to do.
First, I like to speak in English. So I enrolled in a class through Power English to not forget to speak in English and to improve it.
After that I’ll focus on the balance between studying and hobby activities.
I\'m nervous and awkward to use English after long time, but it is so fun and exciting to me.
강사 첨삭
Good evening [이름]!
I believe that you are really excited to study English, I could feel it!
I hope that someday you would be able to fulfill all your plans in life.
Fighting!
I have a lot of things I want to do.
>>CORRECT!
OR: There are many things I want to do.
I mean that I want to study about my job and play golf, paint the painting, learn something.
>>I want to study about my job, play golf, paint and learn something.
But I have time only after work and weekend.
>>But I only have time after work and weekends.
I know what I don’t have time is an excuse.
>>I know it\'s an excuse that I don\'t have time.
So I’m trying to use my time efficiently.
>>CORRECT!
To do that, I decided to set a priority for what I want to do.
>>To do so, I decided to prioritize what I wanted to do.
First, I like to speak in English.
>>First, I like to speak English.
So I enrolled in a class through Power English to not forget to speak in English and to improve it.
>>So I tried to improve my English by enrolling in Power English.
After that I’ll focus on the balance between studying and hobby activities.
>>After that I will balance my studies and activities.
I\'m nervous and awkward to use English after long time, but it is so fun and exciting to me.
>>It\'s been a while since I spoke English, so I\'m nervous and awkward, but it\'s so fun and exciting.
>>CORRECT!
OR: There are many things I want to do.
I mean that I want to study about my job and play golf, paint the painting, learn something.
>>I want to study about my job, play golf, paint and learn something.
But I have time only after work and weekend.
>>But I only have time after work and weekends.
I know what I don’t have time is an excuse.
>>I know it\'s an excuse that I don\'t have time.
So I’m trying to use my time efficiently.
>>CORRECT!
To do that, I decided to set a priority for what I want to do.
>>To do so, I decided to prioritize what I wanted to do.
First, I like to speak in English.
>>First, I like to speak English.
So I enrolled in a class through Power English to not forget to speak in English and to improve it.
>>So I tried to improve my English by enrolling in Power English.
After that I’ll focus on the balance between studying and hobby activities.
>>After that I will balance my studies and activities.
I\'m nervous and awkward to use English after long time, but it is so fun and exciting to me.
>>It\'s been a while since I spoke English, so I\'m nervous and awkward, but it\'s so fun and exciting.
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