The planet that I will pick if I can live in a different planet
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I’m not that interested in planets but if I should choose one, I will pick Mars. Because I heard people discovered that there were trace of water. Maybe someday if the earth is destroyed then we should find a new planet to live. I hope it won’t happen to us but if I have to choose I will pick Mars.
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I’m not that interested in planets but if I should choose one, I will pick Mars.
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Because I heard people discovered that there were trace of water.
>> It\'s because I heard that people discovered traces of water in Mars.
>> It\'s because I heard that people discovered traces of water in Mars.
Maybe someday if the earth is destroyed then we should find a new planet to live.
>> Maybe someday, if the earth is destroyed, we should find a new planet to live.
I hope it won’t happen to us but if I have to choose I will pick Mars.
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