The plot of “ snowpiercer”

2013-08-05 · 첨삭 강사 Leny

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This is summary of the movie “ snowpiercer” that I watched this weekend. Because of global warming, people thought the temperature of earth might go up to the point where humanity cannot exist. So, to go down the temperature, a lot of countries decided to spread out refrigerants into skies, and due to misuse of it, the temperature of earth was going down even to face everything freezing. The earth was in Iced age, and Wilford who had loved trains invented a train that has an eternal engine and provides everything for human survival in the train. But there was discrimination among sections in the train. People in the front sections are treated richly, on the other hand, others in the tail sections like animals now that they got free ride. They made an armed revolution to take the front by opening doors. FYI, It was exported to 176 countries. It cost about $40 million to make it. This number is the most expensive cost in Korean movie history. Hope you can watch it!

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Hi there! I thought I was reading a movie review!!^_^ Thank you for summarizing this movie for me! Hmm, I got an idea from this. If you have enough time to write down some interesting reviews about what you did or what you saw, you can always do it! This will help you express your ideas not only in written English but also spoken.   Ohm I encourage you to watch more interesting English movies. I bet when you didn\'t watch this Snowpierce Movie, you didn\'t know the word \"refrigerant\" yet, right? You see, we really learn something from what we see, hear, and touch everyday. Have a good day, David! T. Leny   This is summary of the movie “ snowpiercer” that I watched this weekend. >>> CORRECTBecause of global warming, people thought the temperature of earth might go up to the point where humanity cannot exist. >>> CORRECTSo, to go down the temperature, a lot of countries decided to spread out refrigerants into skies, and due to misuse of it, the temperature of earth was going down even to face everything freezing. >>> So, to lower down the temperature, a lot of countries decided to spread out refrigerants in the sky however, due to misuse of it, the temperature on earth went to the freezing point. Everything was frozen.The earth was in Iced age, and Wilford who had loved trains, invented a train that has an eternal engine and provides everything for human survival in the train. >>> CORRECTBut there was discrimination among sections in the train. >>> CORRECT People in the front sections are treated richly, on the other hand, others in the tail sections like animals now that they got free ride. >>> CORRECT >>> OR: Those who are in the front sections of the train are treated well and good unlike those who are at the tail end of the train where they are treated inhumanely just because they are poor but they got free ride. They made an armed revolution to take the front by opening doors.>>> CORRECTFYI, it was exported to 176 countries. >>> CORRECTIt cost about $40 million to make it. >>> It costs about $40 million to make it. This number is the most expensive cost in Korean movie history. >>> CORRECT >>> OR: This figure is the highest so far in the history of Korean movie.Hope you can watch it! >>> CORRECT

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