The pollution.

2023-02-10 · 첨삭 강사 Tricia

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The types of pollution I know of include air pollution, water pollution, and soil pollution. Air pollution is characterized by deterioration of air quality, making it difficult for living organisms to breathe, and water pollution is characterized by the death of many aquatic organisms due to contamination of water. Soil contamination is the contamination of the land, which is characterized by the fact that the plants we eat do not grow. Pollution is not good.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)

~ Teacher Tricia

The types of pollution I know of include air pollution, water pollution, and soil pollution. 
>>> CORRECT!

Air pollution is characterized by deterioration of air quality, making it difficult for living organisms to breathe, and water pollution is characterized by the death of many aquatic organisms due to contamination of water. 
>>> Air pollution is characterized by the deterioration of air quality, making it difficult for living organisms to breathe, and water pollution is characterized by the death of many aquatic organisms due to water contamination.

Soil contamination is the contamination of the land, which is characterized by the fact that the plants we eat do not grow. Pollution is not good.
>>> CORRECT!

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