The popular car among my friends
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We are actually young to buy our own car but , I think K series of KIA is popular car model among my peers such as K3, K5.
Also Avante of Hyundai is popular. They are both cheaper than any other high-quality cars and cost-effective.
My peers including me can\'t afford expensive car and cannot keep a car which costs a lot of gas.
I think that the design of these cars are also modern and look good.
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WRITING TASK: Which car brand/model is becoming popular among your peers? What could
be the reason behind it?
My peers including me can\'t afford expensive car and cannot keep a car which costs a lot of gas.
I think that the design of these cars are also modern and look good.
We are actually young to buy our own car but , I think K series of KIA is popular car model among my peers such as K3, K5.
>> We are actually too young to buy our own car, but I think the K series of KIA such as K3 and K5 is a popular car model among my peers .
Also Avante of Hyundai is popular.
>> The Avante of Hyundai is also popular.
They are both cheaper than any other high-quality cars and cost-effective.
>> CORRECT!!
My peers including me can\'t afford expensive car and cannot keep a car which costs a lot of gas.
>> My peers and I couldn\'t afford an expensive car and cannot keep a car which costs a lot of gas.
I think that the design of these cars are also modern and look good.
>> I think that the design of these cars are also modern and looks good.
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