THe possession of arms
학생이 쓴 원문
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Hello, [이름]! I agree with you. It was indeed a catastrophic incident. So, we should always be vigilant whenever we are because such incidents may happen anytime and anywhere. Take care always!
~Teacher Chloe
The dead 58. The wounded 515.
>>The are 58 died and 515 wounded.
Do you know what the result means?
>>Correct!
Stephen paddock was an American mass murderer responsible for the 2017 Las Vegas shooting.
>>Stephen Paddock is an American mass murderer responsible for the 2017 Las Vegas shooting.
He fired modified semi-automatic weapons from his room on the 32nd floor of the Mandalay Bay hotel into a crowd of approximately 22,000 concertgoers at a country music festival on the Las Vegas Strip on October 1, 2017.
>>He fired modified semi-automatic weapons from his room on the 32nd floor of the Mandalay Bay hotel into a crowd of approximately 22,000 concertgoers at the country Music Festival on the Las Vegas Strip on October 1, 2017.
IS claimed that they were directed.
>>Correct!
However, the police said it was only a single act.
>>Correct!
The criminal moved in thorough plan.
>>Correct!
We searched for a good place to shoot.
>>Correct!
And he fired shots at the highlight of the performance.
>>Correct!
However, he has already committed suicide and could not blame himself.
>>However, he has already committed suicide and could not blame him.
His brother is curious about his brother`s motives for the crime.
>>Correct!
It was the terrible that we have ever heard.
>>It is one of the terrible incidents that we have ever heard.
I read a news about the victim`s family.
>>Correct!
I was regretted to listen such a catastrophic news.
>>I regretted to know such a catastrophic news.
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