the possibility that clothes from the movie will become fashionable
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, I think so. When a movie is well received, it\'s not always the case, but it\'s often the clothes in the movie that are in fashion. And while the way people look for clothes themselves is easily annoying and they give up looking for them, I think what\'s in the movie is not something we look for on purpose, but something that\'s in the movie is less troublesome because it\'s shown in the movie.
강사 첨삭
Yes, I think so.
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When a movie is well received, it\'s not always the case, but it\'s often the clothes in the movie that are in fashion.
>> When a movie is well received, it’s often the clothes in the movie that become fashionable, though not always.
And while the way people look for clothes themselves is easily annoying and they give up looking for them, I think what\'s in the movie is not something we look for on purpose, but something that\'s in the movie is less troublesome because it\'s shown in the movie.
>> Looking for clothes ourselves can be frustrating, and people often give up. But clothes shown in movies are easier to notice and adopt, because they’re already presented in the film.
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