the possible effects of videogames or violent toys on children.

Children are leaking in judgement. So they easily confuse the realistic and fantasy world of game or toy. Also, in that age, whatever they see, they easily copy and follow even if it is really bad action or thinking. For example, These days kids are very insensitive of violence. Since they easily contact violence video games through their own smart-phone and even they made their own violent toy by searching the internet. When I was really young, my older brother had made his own pin-bullet and played it, but suddenly it was shoot my brother's eye, so he had got injured his left eye. Since this injury, my brother still suffer from bad eyesight. At that time we didn't notice it is really dangerous thing. However now we know it was really dangerous that child play violent toys. If they didn't stop playing or watching violent video and violent toy, their sense of violence getting weak and insensitive, and finally they'll grow up a bad person.

Hi [이름]! ^^   We share the same opinion about this topic. ^^ Yes, children nowadays are callused or desensitized to violence because of the media and the toys given to them. Good job in your essay although be careful in describing something as \"bad\". It\'s better to practice some tact or diplomacy by choosing our words. ^^   P.S. judgement is the British spelling and judgment is the American one. Both is acceptable. ^^   See you in class!   All good things, ==Teacher Charlie==     Children are leaking in judgement. So they easily confuse the realistic and fantasy world of game or toy. >> Children lack in good judgment so they easily confuse reality with fantasy when playing videogames or toys.   Also, in that age, whatever they see, they easily copy and follow even if it is really bad action or thinking. >> Also, at that age, they are easily influenced and copy ideas and actions even if it is quite appalling. For example, These days kids are very insensitive of violence. Since they easily contact violence video games through their own smart-phone and even they made their own violent toy by searching the internet. >>For example, kids nowadays are desensitized to violence since they can easily access disturbing video games through their smartphones and even make their own worrisome toys by searching the internet.   When I was really young, my older brother had made his own pin-bullet and played it, but suddenly it was shoot my brother\'s eye, so he had got injured his left eye. Since this injury, my brother still suffer from bad eyesight.>> In my childhood, my older brother made his own pin gun to play with but suddenly it went off into my brother\'s face thereby injuring his left eye. Since then, my brother has been suffering from bad eyesight. At that time we didn\'t notice it is really dangerous thing. However now we know it was really dangerous that child play violent toys. >>At that time, we were not aware of how dangerous it could be but now, we know that it is disconcerting for children to play with violent toys.   If they didn\'t stop playing or watching violent video and violent toy, their sense of violence getting weak and insensitive, and finally they\'ll grow up a bad person. >> If children do not stop playing or watching disturbing toys and videos, they will be desensitized to violence hence leading them to grow up into unethical people.