The Post Everything on Social Media
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I don\'t think that people need to post everything on social media. This is because that\'s really stress to myself. People don\'t satisfied just to post and that posters will get on one\'s nerves. Perhaps they will continue watch their phone to check the posters, because the posters usually have the heart and comments. So, they can\'t concentrate on working and life. I think that for this reason.
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~~ Teacher Sharon
I don\'t think that people need to post everything on social media.
>> Correct
This is because that\'s really stress to myself.
>> This is because it would really be stressful for me.
People don\'t satisfied just to post and that posters will get on one\'s nerves.
>> People are not satisfied with just posting and they can get restless.
Perhaps they will continue watch their phone to check the posters, because the posters usually have the heart and comments.
>> Perhaps they will continue to look at their phones to check the posts because they usually have likes and comments.
So, they can\'t concentrate on working and life.
>> Correct
I think that for this reason.
>> I think this is the reason.
>> I think this is the reason.
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