The poverty life.
학생이 쓴 원문
Because prices are constantly rising, and in today\'s world, money is everything. And there aren\'t many jobs. As the minimum wage rises, fewer companies are willing to hire people. Their lives are not improving.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
Because prices are constantly rising, and in today\'s world, money is everything.
>>> CORRECT!
And there aren\'t many jobs.
>>> CORRECT!
As the minimum wage rises, fewer companies are willing to hire people.
>>> CORRECT!
Their lives are not improving.
>>> CORRECT!
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