The price
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I am afraid ,I think expensive things have almost good quality.
The price of things are included the maker,
technology and material prices.
To make good things cost a lot of money.
So the price is getting higher.
But I also Agree cheap things don’t have
low quality.
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Hello [이름]ny!
Thank you for writing a very smart answer. I gave you some corrections on your sentence to make your writing better.
Have a good day :)
Aki~
I am afraid, I think expensive things have almost good quality.
>>> CORRECT!
The price of things are included the maker, technology, and material prices.
>>> The price of things includes the maker, technology, and material prices.
>>> The cost of things includes the manufacturer, technology, and raw materials.
To make good things cost a lot of money.
>>> Making good things costs a lot of money.
So the price is getting higher.
>>> CORRECT!
But I also Agree cheap things don’t have low quality.
>>> But I also agree that cheap things does not mean low quality.
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