The problem related to the neighborhood.
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes. I think the big problem is that buying a house or an apartment is very costly here in korea.
So a lot of people prefer just renting a house or an apartment for this particular reason.
The population is greater than ever . I think it is main cause to raise the house prices.
and There is no adequate amount of apartments and houses to live in.
But I think this problem will be answered if there are more apartment and houses with affordable prices.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름].I agree that the cost of housing in Korea is very high especially in major cities like busan and seoul.But for me if you have enough money to acquire a house why noy purchase one?It will be a good investment for you.Do you have your own house? Which do you prefer living in an apartment or in a house?
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Yes. I think the big problem is that buying a house or an apartment is very costly here in korea.>>CorrectSo a lot of people prefer just renting a house or an apartment for this particular reason.>> So a lot of people prefer to rent a house or an apartment for this particular reason.The population is greater than ever .
>>Correct
I think it is main cause to raise the house prices.>>I think it is a major reason of house prices raise.and There is no adequate amount of apartments and houses to live in.>>CorrectBut I think this problem will be answered if there are more apartment and houses with affordable prices.
>>Correct
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