The problem with traveling by airplane.
학생이 쓴 원문
The problem with traveling by airplane is, firstly, that your baby may cry. It\'s a nuisance, but I can\'t help it because I\'m a baby. But it\'s going to be a tough flight time for everyone. Second, you may have bad passengers. Everyone will feel bad if the argument escalates. Third, accidents can happen. They always check before takeoff, but you never know what will happen.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
The problem with traveling by airplane is, firstly, that your baby may cry.
>>> CORRECT!
It\'s a nuisance, but I can\'t help it because I\'m a baby.
>>> CORRECT!
But it\'s going to be a tough flight time for everyone.
>>> CORRECT!
Second, you may have bad passengers.
>>> CORRECT!
Everyone will feel bad if the argument escalates.
>>> CORRECT!
Third, accidents can happen.
>>> CORRECT!
They always check before takeoff, but you never know what will happen.
>>> CORRECT!
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