The product which I want to discuss is Knee protector
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Seven years ago, I got injured my knee during soccer game, so after that injured and rehabilitation was successfully end. At that time my basic need was scare and nervous when I try to play soccer again
I have to overcome that feeling so I search for knee protector in both online and offline and I find something suitable for me. I think that state was wants
when I receive that product I want to remove the label because it makes me itchy and its Velcro was not really tighten so I may suggest to company like ‘could you make like this’ I think this level is demands
Helpful for my telling I bring this 3 types of knee protector
The first one is consisted of kind of knit material
And the both of second one and third one is consisted of polyester
I wore the first type of knee protector. Until my injured, the first one was so good for having light weight and convenience, but it can’t be satisfied product anymore. So I’m going to wear the second product for safety of my knee
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Seven years ago, I got injured my knee during soccer game, so after that injured and rehabilitation was successfully end.
>> Seven years ago, I injured my knee during a soccer game, and after that injury, I had a successful rehabilitation.
At that time my basic need was scare and nervous when I try to play soccer again
>> At that time, I was scared and nervous about how it\'s going to be like when I try to play soccer again.
I have to overcome that feeling so I search for knee protector in both online and offline and I find something suitable for me.
>>I had to overcome that fear so I searched for knee protectors both online and offline and I tried to find something suitable for me.
I think that state was wants when I receive that product I want to remove the label because it makes me itchy and its Velcro was not really tighten so I may suggest to company like ‘could you make like this’ I think this level is demands
>> When I received the product, I wanted to remove the label because it makes me itchy and its Velcro was not really tight enough so suggested the company to adjust it for me.
Helpful for my telling I bring this 3 types of knee protector.
>> It was helpful to talk about that issue and I was able to buy 3 types of knee protectors.
The first one is consisted of kind of knit material.
>> The first one was consisted of a kind of knitted material.
And the both of second one and third one is consisted of polyester
>> And both the second and third one was made of polyester.
I wore the first type of knee protector.
>> CORRECT!
Until my injured, the first one was so good for having light weight and convenience, but it can’t be satisfied product anymore. So I’m going to wear the second product for safety of my knee
>> Until my injury gets better, I will be wearing the first one because it was so good for having a light weight and for it\'s convenience, but I\'m not satisfied with the product anymore.
So I’m going to wear the second product for safety of my knee.
>> CORRECT!
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