the pros and cons of the internet

[이름]!^^ This essay is amazing. Although I have made a few corrections you were able to express yourself greatly.

I am quite impressed! You have made a lot of good points about the internet\'s pros and cons. I agree with you.

Thank you for putting much effort in writing.  Keep it up!

~Teacher Asia :)

What\'s are the pros and cons of the internet?
Technology has brought us the good and the side effects, and the internet is one of the representative example of technology.

>>Technology has brought us good and bad side effects. And the internet is one of the best representation of technology now.

The internet let people capable of chatting each other even in long distance, and it makes possible to exchange big and important information.

>>The internet enables people to chat with each other even from a long distance and it makes it possible to exchange big and important information.

Even thirty ears ago- even in that so close distance of history- people had to wait months to see the letter written back, and the library was the only place they can get information from.

>>Even thirty years ago-in the past- people had to wait months to see the a letter written back and the library was the only place they can get information from.

However nowadays, people can search and get information much more faster with the internet\'s help.

>>CORRECT

OR>>However nowadays, people can get information a lot quicker with the internet\'s help.

Nowadays people don\'t have to wait for long time to get the lovers\' letter back who live in far distance.

>>But now people don\'t have to wait for a long time to get their lover\'s letter back when they\'re from a far.

As many things do, however, there are some side effects of the internet.

>>With these being said, the internet has negative effects too.

For the first, people can be addicted to the internet chatting and lost their sense of reality.

>>First, people can be addicted to the internet, chatting and they can lose their sense of reality.

It might shorten the time for waiting to get some new info, but it also confuse people with flase information as well.

>>It has shortened the time of waiting to get some new information, but it also confuses people with false information as well.