The proudest moment
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
How are you [이름]?
I hope you are in a good state there.
Thank you for sharing this to me. Your parents must be very proud of you when you finally got into the university.
Tell me more about it in class, okay?
See you!
~Teacher Shanee^^,
I can say the moment that I was proud of myself was that I passed the exam for special admission and transferred as a junior to a national university which my parents want me to get into.
>>> I can say the proudest moment of my life was when I passed the exam for special admission and transferred as a junior to the national university which my parents wanted me to get into.
My sisters are very smart, intelligent and nice so they entered a good university without any trouble but I wasn\'t interested in studying at all so I used to sleep everyday during class at school.
>>> My sisters are smart, intelligent and nice so they entered a good university without any trouble. But I wasn\'t interested in studying at all so I used to sleep every day during my classes at school.
Because my two elder sisters were doing perfectly well that my parents wanted and I didn\'t make good marks at school so I thought my parents didn\'t have any expectations for me and might give up on me.
>>> Because my two elder sisters were doing perfectly well which my parents wanted but it\'s the opposite in my case, I thought my parents didn\'t have any expectations from me and that they might have given up on me.
However, when I enter the two-year course college, one evening, my mother my mother said to me carefully she would break her heart if I could not live well as much as my sisters.
>>> However, when I entered the two-year course college, one evening my mother said to me carefully that it would break her heart if I could not live well as much as my sisters.
At that time, I knew my mother cared and worried about me.
>>> Correct!
Since she never scolded me severely and told me what to do, I felt she didn\'t care about me but she just didn\'t want me to get hurt and to trust me.
>>> Since she never scolded ,e severely and told me what to do, I felt she didn\'t care about me. But I realized, she just didn\'t want me to get hurt and that she trusted me.
After the day that my mother told me her mind, I decided to go into a national university so studied very hard and finally I could manage it.
>>> After the day my mother told me her thoughts, I decided to go into a national university so I studied very hard and finally managed to enter one.
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