The proudest moment.
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I can say that the proudest moment was when I pass the medical school entrance exam. In 2012, lots of people in my major, biology, was preparing for the medical school. I made a study group of 4 people. We studied together from 9:00 to 23:00. We took internet classes together in the morning and afternoon until 15:00. Then we reviewed what we learned that day and did homework of internet classes. The subject for the entrance exam was General Biology, General Chemistry, Organic Chemistry, General physics, and English. For English people can take TOEIC, TOFLE, or TEPS. People can choose what to take. I tried TEPS because TOEIC was not fun and too formal. The highest score of TEPS I got was 917. This was also my proudest moment since this correspond to 980 of TOEIC. Since then, however, I stopped to study English because I had a lot to study other than English like the medical knowledge or Japanese.
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This is indeed a very proud moment! :)
>> I can say that my proudest moment was when I passed the medical school entrance exam.
In 2012, lots of people in my major, biology, was preparing for the medical school.
>> In the year 2012, lots of people in my major, Biology, prepared for medical school.
I made a study group of 4 people. We studied together from 9:00 to 23:00.
>> I made a study group of 4 people. We studied together from 21:00 to 23:00.
We took internet classes together in the morning and afternoon until 15:00.
>> Correct.
Then we reviewed what we learned that day and did homework of internet classes.
>> Then we reviewed what we learned from that day and did homeworks from our internet classes.
The subject for the entrance exam was General Biology, General Chemistry, Organic Chemistry, General physics, and English.
>> The subjects for the entrance exam were General Biology, General Chemistry, Organic Chemistry, General physics, and English.
For English people can take TOEIC, TOFLE, or TEPS. People can choose what to take.
>> For English people, they can take TOEIC, TOFLE, or TEPS. People can choose what to take.
I tried TEPS because TOEIC was not fun and too formal. The highest score of TEPS I got was 917.
>> I tried TEPS because TOEIC was not fun and too formal. The highest score for TEPS that I got was 917.
This was also my proudest moment since this correspond to 980 of TOEIC.
>> This was also my proudest moment since this corresponds to the 980 score of TOEIC.
Since then, however, I stopped to study English because I had a lot to study other than English like the medical knowledge or Japanese.
>> Since then, however, I stopped studying English because I had a lot to study other than English, like medical knowledge or Japanese.
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