The proudest moment of my life
학생이 쓴 원문
I think the most prodest moment of my life is when I first started the game called brawl stars because I had a lot of fun playing it because it was fun and it had rpg and back stories
I can\'t excatly rember
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Jade!
(^__^)
Thank you so much for finding time to accomplish your homework.
I\'ve made some modifications you can review later on.
If you have questions, don\'t ever hesitate to ask, okay?
Have a good weekend!
__T. Mayleen :)
I think the most prodest moment of my life is when I first started the game called brawl stars because I had a lot of fun playing it because it was fun and it had rpg and back stories
>>> I think the proudest moment of my life was when I first started the game called Brawl Stars. I had a lot of fun playing it because it was fun and it had RPGS and back stories.
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