The purpose of studying English.

2011-08-24 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

학생이 쓴 원문

I started English lesson two weeks ago. At first, I shyed and strained approching at 12 p.m. But now I expect to get a call from teacher Lara . I hope to speak English well. I love taveling alone, BUT I can't speak English well, I felt lonely and difficult. In future, when I travel abroad again, I will conversation with lacal . I hope I can impress my opinion and complain, In east Germany, When I had a racial discrimination, I got upset . So I argued in Korea. Of course he did'nt undertand me , I was surffy and I felt unfair. I want to revenge him !!!! Contrarily when I traveled except East Germany , I thanked that many people help me. So I will help traveller to find road or tourist place in Korea . I will study English hard more now!

강사 첨삭

Hello! You did a good job in writing this composition. It is always a pleasure talking to you.  I can see that you want to be better at speaking English and I would love to help you. I noticed  some mistakes. Please check them out. Have a nice evening! See you tomorrow! T. Lara I started English lesson two weeks ago. >> I started English lessons two weeks ago. At first, I shyed and strained approching at 12 p.m. >> At first, I felt shy and strained when 12 pm approached. But now I expect to get a call from teacher Lara . >> But now I expect to get a call from teacher Lara. I hope to speak English well. >>CorrectI love taveling alone, BUT I can't speak English well, I felt lonely and difficult. >> I love traveling alone, BUT I can't speak English well so, I felt lonely and difficult.In future, when I travel abroad again, I will conversation with lacal . >> In the future, when I travel abroad again, I will have a conversation with a local. I hope I can impress my opinion and complain, >> I hope I can express my opinion and complaints. In east Germany, When I had a racial discrimination, I got upset . >> In East Germany, when I experienced racial discrimination, I got upset. So I argued in Korea. >> So I argued in Korean. Of course he did'nt undertand me , I was surffy and I felt unfair. >> Of course he didn't understand me, I was suffering and I felt that it was unfair.I want to revenge him !!!! >>I want revenge!Contrarily when I traveled except East Germany , I thanked that many people help me. >> Contrarily when I traveled to other places aside from East Germany, I thanked the people who helped me. So I will help traveller to find road or tourist place in Korea . >> So I will help travelers to find road or tourist spots in Korea.I will study English hard more now! >> I will study English harder now!

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