The purpose of studying English.
학생이 쓴 원문
I started English lesson two weeks ago.
At first, I shyed and strained approching at 12 p.m.
But now I expect to get a call from teacher Lara .
I hope to speak English well.
I love taveling alone, BUT I can't speak English well, I felt lonely and difficult.
In future, when I travel abroad again, I will conversation with lacal .
I hope I can impress my opinion and complain,
In east Germany, When I had a racial discrimination, I got upset .
So I argued in Korea.
Of course he did'nt undertand me , I was surffy and I felt unfair.
I want to revenge him !!!!
Contrarily when I traveled except East Germany , I thanked that many people help me.
So I will help traveller to find road or tourist place in Korea .
I will study English hard more now!
강사 첨삭
Hello!
You did a good job in writing this composition. It is always a pleasure talking to you.
I can see that you want to be better at speaking English and I would love to help you. I noticed
some mistakes. Please check them out. Have a nice evening! See you tomorrow!
T. Lara
I started English lesson two weeks ago.
>> I started English lessons two weeks ago. At first, I shyed and strained approching at 12 p.m.
>> At first, I felt shy and strained when 12 pm approached. But now I expect to get a call from teacher Lara .
>> But now I expect to get a call from teacher Lara. I hope to speak English well.
>>CorrectI love taveling alone, BUT I can't speak English well, I felt lonely and difficult.
>> I love traveling alone, BUT I can't speak English well so, I felt lonely and difficult.In future, when I travel abroad again, I will conversation with lacal .
>> In the future, when I travel abroad again, I will have a conversation with a local. I hope I can impress my opinion and complain,
>> I hope I can express my opinion and complaints.
In east Germany, When I had a racial discrimination, I got upset .
>> In East Germany, when I experienced racial discrimination, I got upset. So I argued in Korea.
>> So I argued in Korean. Of course he did'nt undertand me , I was surffy and I felt unfair.
>> Of course he didn't understand me, I was suffering and I felt that it was unfair.I want to revenge him !!!!
>>I want revenge!Contrarily when I traveled except East Germany , I thanked that many people help me.
>> Contrarily when I traveled to other places aside from East Germany, I thanked the people who helped me. So I will help traveller to find road or tourist place in Korea .
>> So I will help travelers to find road or tourist spots in Korea.I will study English hard more now!
>> I will study English harder now!
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