The qualification of education in Korea.
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!(\",)
I remember a Korean drama entitled Master of Study. The students on that drama just studied from morning to night. I don\'t think that is healthy. Anyway, I hope the ministry of education in Korea will also consider other aspects of education or learning because right now they are only focusing on the cognitive. See you in class!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
Korean students study the hardest in the world.
>> correct!
There are a lot of studying gods that get the perfect score in the university entrance test.
>> There are many students who mastered studying so they get perfect scores in the university entrance test.
It is so called the gods of studying.
>> They are called the gods of studying.
Korean parents want their children to study hard.
>> correct!
Because they believe that study will improve their standard of living.
>> Because they believe that studying will improve their standard of living.
There is also the influence of Chosun era which emphasizes studying.
>> correct!
However, the times have changed. Society have become very diverse.
>> correct!
We have a lot to do besides studying.
>> correct!
Nevertheless, many parents force their children to study.
>> correct!
Now, the teenagers should be voluntarily study by themselves.
>> Now, the teenagers should voluntarily study by themselves.
It should be changed from teaching by rote to creative education.
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The IQ of Korean students is very high.
>> correct!
We need to change the educational environment that the high IQ can be exercised properly.
>> We need to change the educational systems to suit the needs of the high IQ students.
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