The quality of an ideal parent

2016-08-12 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Essay Writing: Decide what are the three most important qualities of an ideal parent. Are there any other qualities that you would like to add to your list? You won’t know the correct answers because you are not married yet, and there are not answers. Being a parent is not only a responsibility but also a choice. On the other hand, being a son or daughter is not their choice. It means if we make a decision, we must take a responsibility whether it is good or bad. So, I certainly believe that being a parent is the most accountable decision that we will be experienced in our life. If I pick up the three key elements that a parent must to have. Above all, financial statement would be a priority, secondly, the knowledge from the educational background to be independent, and lastly, healthy body to bring up the family Besides, generous mind would be appreciated to get along with other people

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Good day Michael! Thank you so much for your time. I appreciate that you always do your essay homework. You did a great job in sharing your ideas in writing. See you in class. Teacher Nina   Essay Writing:Decide what are the three most important qualities of an ideal parent. Are there any other qualities that you would like to add to your list?You won’t know the correct answers because you are not married yet, and there are not answers. >> You won’t know the correct answers because you are not yet married and there is no answer regarding that question.Being a parent is not only a responsibility but also a choice. >> correct On the other hand, being a son or daughter is not their choice. >> correct It means if we make a decision, we must take a responsibility whether it is good or bad. >> It means if we make a decision, we must take the responsibility whether it is good or bad. >> OR: It means if we make a decision, we must be responsible whatever the cicumstances will be.So, I certainly believe that being a parent is the most accountable decision that we will be experienced in our life. >> So, I certainly believe that being a parent is the most accountable decision that we will experienced in our life.If I pick up the three key elements that a parent must to have. >> If I pick up the three key elements that a parent must have. Above all, financial statement would be a priority, secondly, the knowledge from the educational background to be independent, and lastly, healthy body to bring up the family >> Above all, financial stability would be the priority. Secondly, the knowledge from the educational background to be independent, and lastly, healthy body to bring up the familyBesides, generous mind would be appreciated to get along with other people >> correct

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