The question that makes me sad

2018-02-19 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

학생이 쓴 원문

I know the trend some people don’t want to have children. Of course, I can’t understand exactly all the situations of everyone. I know we are having different financial, social conditions and so on. I acknowledge I can’t understand everyone’s detail situations, but I think the question about advantages and disadvantages to have no children is meaningless. Because people is not a stuff. And children are given the kind of gift to each home. So I’m so sad when I reply to some questions like that. Yeah I agree I’m out of point of the question you were about to ask. And there is some advantages when we don’t have children. Yeah, sure. And I can tell you about pros and cons. If some people put it like that, we don’t have reason to have a baby. I think taking a cautious attitude is good to most of situations, but there are exceptions. And I think the one of that is having a baby.

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I know the trend some people don’t want to have children.

>>> OR: I know that the current trend is not having any children.

Of course, I can’t understand exactly all the situations of everyone.

>>> Correct!

I know we are having different financial, social conditions and so on.
>>> I know we have different financial or social conditions.


I acknowledge I can’t understand everyone’s detail situations, but I think the question about advantages and disadvantages to have no children is meaningless.

>>> I acknowledge / admit I can\'t understand everyone\'s situation. But I think the question about advantages and disadvantages of not having children is meaningless.

Because people is not a stuff.

>>> Because people are not things.

And children are given the kind of gift to each home.

>>> And children are given God\'s gift to their family.

So I’m so sad when I reply to some questions like that. 

>>> Correct!

Yeah I agree I’m out of point of the question you were about to ask.

>>> Yeah, I agree I don\'t make sense for not understanding the question you\'re asking.

And there is some advantages when we don’t have children.

>>> And there are some advantages when we don\'t have children.

Yeah, sure. And I can tell you about pros and cons.

>>> Correct!


If some people put it like that, we don’t have reason to have a baby.

>>> If some people put it like that, we don\'t have a reason to have a baby.

I think taking a cautious attitude is good to most of situations, but there are exceptions.

>>> I think taking cautions is good in most situations, but there are exceptions.

And I think the one of that is having a baby.

>>> And I think one of those is having a baby.

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