The question that makes me sad
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I know the trend some people don’t want to have children.
>>> OR: I know that the current trend is not having any children.
Of course, I can’t understand exactly all the situations of everyone.
>>> Correct!
I know we are having different financial, social conditions and so on.
>>> I know we have different financial or social conditions.
I acknowledge I can’t understand everyone’s detail situations, but I think the question about advantages and disadvantages to have no children is meaningless.
>>> I acknowledge / admit I can\'t understand everyone\'s situation. But I think the question about advantages and disadvantages of not having children is meaningless.
Because people is not a stuff.
>>> Because people are not things.
And children are given the kind of gift to each home.
>>> And children are given God\'s gift to their family.
So I’m so sad when I reply to some questions like that.
>>> Correct!
Yeah I agree I’m out of point of the question you were about to ask.
>>> Yeah, I agree I don\'t make sense for not understanding the question you\'re asking.
And there is some advantages when we don’t have children.
>>> And there are some advantages when we don\'t have children.
Yeah, sure. And I can tell you about pros and cons.
>>> Correct!
If some people put it like that, we don’t have reason to have a baby.
>>> If some people put it like that, we don\'t have a reason to have a baby.
I think taking a cautious attitude is good to most of situations, but there are exceptions.
>>> I think taking cautions is good in most situations, but there are exceptions.
And I think the one of that is having a baby.
>>> And I think one of those is having a baby.
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