THE QWESTION.........ㅠㅠㅠ

2011-07-27 · 첨삭 강사 May

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I can't remember the qwestion,,, so I'll just write about my strngths and weaknesses more specifically. my most talented strengths is the way I'm thinking. I think really freely... I have no barriers when I'm thinking. I try to understand this world in my own thought. My weakness is even though I think lot of things I don't do things that my mind is saying. I can't do anything long time.And my emotion is changing fast.

강사 첨삭

Hello! You wrote this quite well. You have a very interesting strength. That's great! I noticed a few mistakes. Have a great night! T. May   I can't remember the qwestion,,, so I'll just write about my strngths and weaknesses more specifically.>> I can't remember the question,,, so I'll just write about my strengths and weaknesses more specifically.my most talented strengths is the way I'm thinking. >> My strength is the way I think. I think really freely... I have no barriers when I'm thinking. >>I think freely... I have no barriers when I'm thinking. I try to understand this world in my own thought. >> I try to understand this world in my own thoughts.My weakness is even though I think lot of things I don't do things that my mind is saying.>> My weakness is even though I think of a lot of things I don't do things that my mind is saying.I can't do anything long time. >> I can't do anything for a long time. And my emotion is changing fast. >> And my emotions change quickly.

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