The reality is different from ideal we had looked forward.

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I think the original purpose to offer online courses to student is pure.

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They just wanted to make some students comfortable for having a time to other work or anything.

>>> They just wanted to make students comfortable while studying and doing other activities.

I believe their(who thought of the idea that offer online courses) first intention was pure.

>>> I believe their (those who thought of the idea of offering online courses) first intention was pure.

But they were too naïve to know the reality. 

>>> But they were too naïve to know the reality.

Actually, many students don’t want to study.

>>> Correct!

That’s why online courses are popular to students.

>>> Correct!

So what do you think when they take a class in online how their lesson attitude are?

>>>So, what do you think their learning attitude during online classes will be?

Maybe the person who made online courses thought many students have a passion to learn something.

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But the reality is almost of them are just playing video.

>>> But the reality is most of them are just playing videos.

They don’t listen to that.

>>> Correct!

They just only play for checking their attendance.

>>> They just only attend their classes for attendance check.

Of course, it’s up to them.

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But in my case, it was hard to concentrate.

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Therefore, my opinion to offer online courses is too risky.

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