The reason
학생이 쓴 원문
I have reasons that I don\'t go to abroad for working even some kinds opportunity as educator.
I try to do many thing in Korea after retiring relate to education business.
At first I will establish a my personal institution and continue to lecture for teachers and parents.
The other reason, I should checkup every year for my health after cancer surgery.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, Ms. [이름]!
Yes, many people choose to live and work in their own country, even allowed to work abroad, and everyone should respect that. Thank you for your homework answers. Have a good day!
Aki~
I have reasons that I don\'t go to abroad for working even some kinds opportunity as educator.
>>> I have reasons that I don\'t go abroad for work, even some kinds of opportunities as an educator.
I try to do many thing in Korea after retiring relate to education business.
>>> CORRECT!
At first I will establish a my personal institution and continue to lecture for teachers and parents.
>>> At first, I will establish my personal institution and continue to lecture for teachers and parents.
The other reason, I should checkup every year for my health after cancer surgery.
>>> CORRECT!
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