The reason I believe in life after death
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Yes, I think. I don’t thought about it deeply but I believe in life after death. I don’t really have a specific reason why I believe in it. Just the world is so complex and there are so many strange phenomenon that can’t explain with anything. That’s why I believe in life after death.
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Hi [이름]! Life after death is called \"Heaven\". Some people believe in it and some don\'t. It actually depends on your faith. Our perspectives are different from another. Thanks for sharing yours :)
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Yes, I think. I don’t thought about it deeply but I believe in life after death.
>>Yes, I do believe in it. I haven\'t thought about it deeply but I believe in life after death.
I don’t really have a specific reason why I believe in it.
>> CORRECT
Just the world is so complex and there are so many strange phenomenon that can’t explain with anything.
>>> The world is so complex and there are so many strange phenomenon that can\'t be explained.
That’s why I believe in life after death.
>>CORRECT
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