The reason that English fluency is significant for me
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름] [이름]. Thank you once again for this. That sounds great! I wish all your plans and dream in life will happen soon. Life is short. We need to enjoy it to the fullest.
- T. Beth
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A fluent English skill is a necessary tool for my dreaming life.
>>> A fluent English skill is a necessary tool for my dream life.
My work doesn\'t permit any free time and I cannot have any chance to think about my life including the present and future.
>>> CORRECT.
I always need my own time.
>>> CORRECT.
So, I decide to go to Sydney, Australia within 2 years.
>>> OR: So, I decide to go to Sydney, Australia in 2 years.
I\'ll have a job in Sydney and enjoy happy life.
>>> I\'ll have a job in Sydney and enjoy a happy life.
That is my dream, and that\'s why I want to speak English fluent.
>>> CORRECT.
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