The reason that I love painting
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I love painting because when I paint, I can only concentrate on painting without bothering. Also when I finish painting, the result is enough to fulfill me. Making new color by mixing others and painting tiny part is the biggest charming point. And I love to give postcard, which is I painted.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]. Thanks for sharing.
-T.Gabby :)
I love painting because when I paint,
>> Correct.
I can only concentrate on painting without bothering.
>> I can only concentrate on painting without feeling bothered.
Also when I finish painting, the result is enough to fulfill me.
>> Correct.
Making new color by mixing others and painting tiny part is the biggest charming point.
>> Correct.
And I love to give postcard, which is I painted.
>> And I love to give postcard, which I painted.
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