The reason that I study special education

I am studying about special education because of my teacher who I met when I was 11years old. I realized someone’s love and effort could change a person’s future. One of reasons that I study special education is that disabled students have a potential individually and I want they receive their equal benefit in society like normal person.

[이름], Thanks for writing. You did a great job and most of your sentences are great! I checked the last one because you lacked some articles and I revised how they are written. I hope you find these corrections useful. By the way, I am moved with this composition of yours. At first, I knew that you are studying about special education, but I didn’t your reason and your passion to help people who are in need of special attention. I think you have a very beautiful heart. I hope you would be able to touch other people’s lives and make a difference in their future. XOXO, Jenny I am studying about special education because of my teacher who I met when I was 11years old. >>Correct. I realized someone’s love and effort could change a person’s future. >>Correct. One of reasons that I study special education is that disabled students have a potential individually and I want they receive their equal benefit in society like normal person. >> One of the reasons is because the disabled students each have his or her individual potential and I want them to receive their equal benefit in the society like normal people.